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Weather-alert
By Fledermaus
08 February 2007
March, a few years ago. In the Alps the snow had melted and so the yearly ritual of flooding European rivers happened. And while the Netherlands had built a new Atlantic wall to face the great North Sea, they had forgotten the dikes along the rivers. In fact they had been stupid enough to build houses on the Uiterwaarden (lands which are suposed to be flooded in such situations).
That spring, the danger came from the other side. The Dutch felt safe behind their massive dikes, their Delta-works and storm surges, when suddenly, the high and hilly province of Limburg flooded. The first to come to the rescue were asylum-seekers. Usually looked down upon by the natives, they arrived before the army. For them this was a lucky chance to escape the bores of their prison and to do something for the people who had given them shelter.
Soon the rest of the river-delta flooded too. It was in no comparisson with the devastating floods caused by the sea decades ago, but still it turned the country upside down.
I remember I was drinking coffee with two students from India. The day before they had called their family back home.
" We can't go to school", they had said.
" Why not?"
" Because Holland is flooded and the trains won't go."
" How bad is it?"
" Some ten centimeters of water on the rails."
Laughter...
" Ten centimeters? Realy? Does it never rain in Holland?"
In India the trains didn't stop for less than a meter of water. They had monsoons every year.

Today there's a weather-alert. Appearantly there's going to be some 10cm of snow. Traffic will be dramatically disrupted and the trains' schedule has been adapted. I wonder how hard the Norwegians will laugh.

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3569 comments posted) 8th February 2007
Yes, a good point you make. Actually, I think we are getting worse at coping with bad weather despite all the sophisticated technology. Some of the schools here have closed for the day for health and safery reasons and the snow isn't even settling. I can remember walking through snow drifts in Ireland to get to school .The school didn't shut, everyone turned up and woe betide you if you were late. I think the weather is as much a state of mind. 
Good piece 
J

Written by teddy (240 comments posted) 8th February 2007
I’m not too sure if any Norwegian would laugh if they lived in England, I’d say they’d be rather annoyed.  
Nice work though, I enjoyed reading it.  
 
teddy

Written by Fledermaus (3492 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Thanks BBS and Teddy :)

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Glad to hear it's not just the British who can't cope with a bit of weather. Back in my day when we had real snow, up to our waists.... 
 
Phil
Hi Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 10th February 2007
I enjoyed reading this. And how nice that the asylum seakers were the first to give aid. You said they escaped the "bores of their prison" - and I wasn't sure what you meant by that. Were you speaking about something that was real - or in their minds?  
 
We too laughed (Norfolk only had a tiny bit of snow this week) at how much worse the media made the situation than it really was. I come from the land of many feet of snow lasting all winter, and life continued pretty much as normal.

Written by Fledermaus (3492 comments posted) 21st February 2007
Thanks Phil and Jean. 
Phil: Well, that was even the case back in MY day :p As a kid I played in the snow every winter. Perhaps the climate is realy changing... 
 
Jean: It's a bit strange how Holland treats its asylum seekers. Some get a house and money for free, while others are put in prison. There have been some horrible incidents concerning this last group, which even led to the resignation of some ministers...

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