Quicklinks:
Short S. | Poetry | Not News | Scripts | Comedy | Non-Fiction | SF | Crime | For Kids | Extended | Village
Great Writing - Home > Poetry > TRES DROLE, N'EST PAS?
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1740 guests online and 6 members online
Poetry
print friendly version     
TRES DROLE, N'EST PAS?
By JohnnyD
09 February 2007
I was cleaning my cupboard when I found couple of French poems that I had written way back. Hope you enjoy reading it...

TRES DROLE, N’EST PAS?

 
LA VIE EST TRES DROLE, N’EST PAS?

ACTUALLEMENT ELLE EST COMME LE CIRQUE

OU TOUT LE MONDE JOUE COMME LE FARCEUR

QUAND MEME CHAQUE AI L’HISTOIRE TRES DIFFERENT

 
COME LE FARCEUR QUI VIS SA VIE COMME LE PLAISANTERIE

IL SOURIT POUR D’AUTRES

ET FAIRE D’AUTRES POUR SOURIS AVEC LUI

MAIS ACTUALLEMENT IT EST TRES TRISTE DANS SA VIE

 
EST-CE QUE C’EST LA VIE?

OU PERSONNE EST POUR QUELQU’UN!

APRES TOUT LE HUMAIN NEE EGOISTE

ET VIVRE SA VIE SOI-MEME

 
QUELQU’UN AI TOUTE LES CHOSES SANS PAIX

QUELQU’UN AI PAIX SANS D’AUTRES CHOSES

QUELQU’UN VOUDRAIS POSSEDER D’AUTRES

ET QUELQU’UN VOUDRAIS TUER D’AUTRES

 
VRAIMENT IL Y A BEAUCOUP DE EXPERIENCES

QUI FAIS LA VIE TRES-TRES DROLE

QUAND MEME IL Y A TOUJOURS SOUFFRANCES

DANS LA VIE COMME LE CIRQUE!

 
Johnny D

24th November 1994

Reviews
s'il vous plait
Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 9th February 2007
-- n''ecrivez pas en grandes lettres, cela dit "je hurle!" Mettez vos mots dans Word, indiquez-les, et cliquez "shift + F3" pour reduire aux petites lettres. 
 
-- id'ee: un peu clich'ee, mais int'eressante. 
 
-- vos noms et verbes n'agr'eent pas - vous ecrivez les pluraux avec les singuliers, et les masculins avec les feminines. 
 
-- priere de ne rediger pas vos oeuvres qu'apres un peu de travail :)  
 

Written by Snodlander (501 comments posted) 9th February 2007
yes, what fell said. 
 
la plume de ma tante est dans le jardin.

Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Sacre bleu! Pourquois en Francaise? Ce n'est pas meillure de votre ecrivant en Anglais, c'est plus mauvais. 
 
Ne pas ranger plus de placards, s'il vous plait! 
 
Oli :eek
German??
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Pas mal. but Will Shaky said it better AND IN ENGLISH 
 
The world is but a stage, ETC. 
 
marybarry

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Failed French O Level, haven't a clue. 
 
Ma vache est mort. 
 
Phil.

Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 9th February 2007
I passed my French O level, but it was nearly 27 years ago, so my French is a little rusty. This poem is very clever, and I managed to work out what it meant, but it might be a good idea, and I'm not having a go, if you lose the capitals - it looks as if you are shouting! 
 
Other than that - good. As I said, my French is quite rusty. 
 
 
By the way Phil - I'm sorry hear about your cow. I hope she didn't suffer. :grin

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Elle lire poesie en Francais. 
 
Pardon.

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 10th February 2007
Should that be 'lit?'

Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 10th February 2007
-- Should that be 'lit?' 
 
Yes it should. Poor cow ;) But perhaps she is reading Rabelais (no relation to Rab C Nesbitt)

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 11th February 2007
Yer an unedjukated pack a gobshites. 
 
leve de frenchies alone. mary du barry :upset

Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 11th February 2007
Who are you calling a gobshite?
X***?!
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 11th February 2007
***** 
*****!!!  
 
f xxxxxxg!! X ****, ****!? !!!??**** £££?  
 
Xxxxxxxx!!? FxxxxxG. X!!! j*****s. 
 
If that fails, phone the Samiritans. 
 
Slan!
Afterthought...
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 11th February 2007
Just in case I did not make myself clear. Samiritans-- 6th Cent BC Sumarin sect who helped those troubled by voices in the head. Best of luck. 
 
Let me know how you get on. I'm rooting for you. 
 
Slan!

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!
 Previous item   Next item
This site is copyright 2005 - 2007 Great Writing. Work submitted by members remains the copyright of the respective authors.
See our Terms of Use and Privacy Policy.