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DEATH
By JohnnyD
09 February 2007

DEATH

 
Everybody knows

The bitter truth of life

Yet it’s so difficult to digest the fact

Not because you have lost someone

But because suddenly there’s a void

No one can ever fill

Yet you are always searching for someone

Who can fill in the void?

Until a day comes

When you also take shape

And leave a void in other’s life.


Johnny D

15th December 2000

Reviews

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 9th February 2007
Well writen. 
Death is a very interesting subject. I have written a feww poems on the subject' 
 
marybarry

Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 9th February 2007
It made some sense until "when you also take shape" - what does that mean? 
 
Otherwise exceedingly deep, meaningful and loaded with insight as always. 
 
Oli

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