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LOVE - A FEELING!
By JohnnyD
10 February 2007
LOVE – A FEELING!

 
Love is a feeling, which develops in one’s heart!

A feeling, which neither can be touched or stolen!

A feeling, which develops for another dear person!

A feeling, which is incomparable!

A feeling, which is rarely respected by the elders!

A feeling, which is immortal and eternal!

A feeling, one holds so dearly in one’s life!

A feeling, which understands no other language!

A feeling, which gives comforts to another soul!

A feeling, which is often broken by people!

A feeling, which cannot be bought!

A feeling, which fights against all odds!

A feeling, which takes an individual to another world!

A feeling, which lingers all life through!

A feeling, which can never be jailed or killed!

A feeling, which is just a feeling and nothing else!

 
Johnny D

10th August 1994

Reviews

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 10th February 2007
Very true in many cases, but love is also unique to each person, it doesn't fall under a set of rules of what it should and shouldn't be.  
 
This obviously came from very powerful feelings but I think you should maybe lose the exclamation marks - it comes across a little too agressive. 
 
Best wishes, 
 

 

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 10th February 2007
Sorry Johnny: too presciptive in theme, too repetitive in nature. Perhaps others will like. 
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 10th February 2007
With the others I'm afraid - really didn't like the exclamation marks or the repetitive nature of this. I also found it a bit cliched in places. Sorry bit this didn't do anything for me - too much like many of your other pieces. 
 
Elli

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 10th February 2007
As a psychiatric nurse, I nursed A lady professor many years ago. 
Her formula for love was as follows. 
 
 
Love is a feeling, 
 
its a funny funny feeling, 
 
its a feeling 
 
that you never felt before. 
 
Its a feeling that you feel, 
 
when you feel 
 
you want to feel it 
 
and a feeling  
 
that you'll feel 
 
forever more. 
 
marybarry

Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 10th February 2007
Jeezus! A psychiatric nurse! 
 
oli

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