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| By bloodywits | ||||||
| 11 February 2007 | ||||||
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First run-through, inspired by the title of Tool's 10,000 Days album. Haven't done any editing and decided to put it down for a few days to see what developed next. Would love to hear what you think, positive or negative. --Bloodywits I’ve run 10,000 miles in these shoes Blind and deaf and dumb by the end but still looking, listening, and calling for you I’ve seen 10,000 people with these eyes Hurt and cold, in love and on fire But I haven’t seen you yet I’ve breathed 10,000 times in this city Felt it settle in my chest like lead I’ve watched the sun rise and set, Darkness slither in and fade out Heard the birds sing and the children scream Fanned the flames and burned it alive Stole 10,000 raindrops and made a glacier Shaped it like your face just to feel you Slept 10,000 days away so I could watch the stars spill over Asked 10,000 questions hoping you’d be the answer Dreamed of you and watched it fade like mist burning off in the sun Reached for you 10,000 times only to grasp my own heart with both hands
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