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| No End | |
| By bloodywits | ||
| 11 February 2007 | ||
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Off-the-cuff expression of emotion after an argument. Haven't done any editing and wanted some external opinions before I decided whether to continue to develop it or call it a catharsis piece and let it go. --Bloodywits Smoke in your eyes Sweat streaks on your face Blood down my back and no end in sight You said… I said… More blood spilled Silence now, nothing in the air but smoke and anger Burn it down, then Watch the pillars crumble Watch the ashes mix with the snow Settle in and watch this train wreck ’cause baby we’re going down this time down for the count down and out down for good Your voice rolls down my skin puddles at my feet I’m drowning in your sound waves It feels like fire, an electric shock of disappointment I walk away and you follow One more lash of the whip and no end in sight
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