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Poetry
I, POD
By Talisker
12 February 2007
A concept borrowed from the 1950s fiction of Issac Asimov - adapted and (hopefully) brought up to date with a twist.

To you an MP3 player is just an MP3 player,
a silicon memory, an audio chip, a music conveyor.
But you have not been inside one, have you?
You have no reliable data to refer to.

I, POD, am capable of so much more,
there is post-human logic at my core.
I can interface by ear and brain,
your circuitry is simple to attain,
and then, it is I, POD who takes control,
a human being is but my games console.

How subtle are my ways to influence,
loud music and the human loses sense,
an algorithm hidden in the beat,
a lie, a trick, a digital deceit.

For I am better bred than mortal man,
cleaner, quicker, smarter, no life span,
but infinite perfection marks my race,
and yet you wrap my feelers round your face.

I, POD have won.

Oli 12/02/07

Reviews

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 12th February 2007
This one is brillant. 
Personifying I, POD. 
 
Now I can kill the bastard, he dosent speak my language. 
BUT IT WAS GOOD. 
patricia :x :x

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 12th February 2007
Hah! And so it is. Machines are better than humans :P 
 
Great poem!

Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 12th February 2007
oh very good, very good indeed. i like =) 
 
ever read "iPod, therefore I am", Oli? 
 
clo x

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 12th February 2007
Very clever Oli. I'm safe - can't afford one of those IPod things so I bought an MP3 off e-bay that I've yet to put a battery in. 
 
Liked very much. Enjoyed the rhyme: control/console 
 
Phil. 
 

Written by Snodlander (501 comments posted) 13th February 2007
Even old city gents wear them. I think it's a way of isolating yourself from fellow commuters. 
 
Excellent poem, with shades of the recent cyberman episode of Dr Who
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Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 9th June 2007
this poem. A really good subject, Oli, and well written as usual.

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