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| Lust calling | |
| By no1butClo | ||||||
| 12 February 2007 | ||||||
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something a bit more...saucy... I wasn't sure whether to involve another voice and make it a male/female thing, but I'm not sure quite how it works as it is, so feedback would be much appreciated [this more to your liking, T?] Body, flesh, stink an exploding mass of impulses. I am physical, hormonal, not within my own control; I am a list of concepts, no more coherence will flow from these quivering lips. So sate them with a higher flavour, toxic enough to fool my instincts, reverse my mind and drive me half to heaven, half to hell with madness. Taint my youthful goblet with the lust of age, and knowing one-seventh sin six-sevenths sensation crack the phial over my hot tongue and let the liquid fever sweat from naïve pores. Hit my belly with it; make it broil, bring to the boil, wait for an equal whose hunger will consume my own, whose wantings I may satisfy. And so infuse us with passion for the white knuckled, tight muscled teen-troubled one night stand.
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