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| Tagus River | |
| By francoise | ||||||
| 13 February 2007 | ||||||
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Advice on this one appreciated :-) Fran. I eat chocolate cake on a rooftop cafe. Slouching for comfort In a metal green chair, I look out to enjoy a dusting of fine mist over wintersun. A layer of building Thick and warm, Bump and stumble Along the Tagus River. Dark crumbs of old houses sliced up against the new. Chipped pink and lemon Cracked mosaic of blue. Windows tucked into blankets of shade Others held up by shoulders of concrete looking out wide eyed and free. In the wintersun I shiver. All I see are places to hide. I collect crumbs with the tips of my fingers. Such slow longings for sweetness And a view to the river.
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