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UNE SOIREE
By JohnnyD
15 February 2007
UNE SOIREE

 
UNE SOIREE D’ETE, J’ETAIT ASSISAIS A COTE LA MERE

REGARDAIS LA SOLIEL SEBAISSE PLUS LOIN A MOI

IL Y A ROUGE ET TRANQUILLITE TOUS

AVEC LA BRUIT D’OISEAUX A QUELQUE FOIS

 
COMMENT J’ETAIT PENSAIS JE NE SAIS PAS?

MAIS J’ETAIT A L’AISE

AVEC L’AMBIANCE ET LA CALME

AUSSI AVEC LA BRUIT D’OISEAUX

 
LE CIEL SEMBLAIT COME L’ART MODERNE

AVEC BEAUCOUP DE COULEURS BARBOTE SUR LA CIEL

AVEC BEAUX VOLAIENT D’OISEAUX

QUI FAISAIENT DE BRUIT TRES BONNE

 
LES OISEAUX ETAIS RENTRAIENT SES CEZS

APRES COMPLETAIS LES TRAVAILS C’EST JOUR

ILS ONT HEUREUX ET FAISAIENT LA BRUIT

APPELAIS LEURS ENFANTS ALORSQUE ILS SAVENT

 
MAIS MOI? J’ETAIT ASSISAIS ET PENSAIS

SUR LE POINT DE LA VIE HUMAIN

LA QUELLE EST TRES EGOISTE ET DENNE DE SENS

PENSAIS! J’AI PERDUE DANS UN ABIME!

 
Johnny D

3rd September 1994

 

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Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 15th February 2007
Why do you persist in writing in capitals? 
 
I don't have enough French to comment on the content. 
 
Phil.

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 15th February 2007
A lot of us don't have the french Johnny. And you really do need to stop using capital letters all the time, it can be quite off-putting to be quite honest. If it's impact your looking for, take the time to choose the right words and that can give you all the impact you'll need. You seem to have an endless flow of inspiration and I'm sure you can use it well if you focus. Probably a cheek coming from me, but there it is anyway. 
 
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