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| Truly Listening (exercise!) | |
| Written by fellpony | ||||||||||||
| 16 February 2007 | ||||||||||||
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I tried using Ahhbee's "Truly Listening" to see what I could make of it, a la Talisker's suggestions. It's not meant as a piss-take but as an exercise. (about 40 minutes worth - how many calories is that?). I watch but I don’t see. I close them out; blindness is safe. To see them would take nerve; how the old man relies on strangers’ kindness, with dog and begging cup, there on the street; how the old woman cries for her thinned hair and the breasts that age has stolen; how the child in Africa lies limply, not shooing flies that rudely crowd his wounds, and the old wife who tended her war-torn soldier remembers her gladness that he came home, when his mates returned as boxed possessions. I should hear. They may say nothing to me, but I’ll listen.
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