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| By -jellyacey- | ||||||||||||||||
| 17 February 2007 | ||||||||||||||||
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uhm...this is my fist entry...and i'm not that good..sao bear with me(i mean that as a request:D) and uhm...sorry for the bad grammar..i'm not good at speaking englishs..so this entry i wrote last month......and i wanted to show it to you guys:D pls. review..and be honest:Dyou can put on bad comments..:D I guess falling isn't really that bad especially when there's someone to catch you I guess falling isn't really that bad if falling meant falling for you I guess falling isn't really that bad it'd be really nice if you didn't know what to do I guess falling isn't really that bad especially when the one to catch me would always be you:D realizing my feelings for you answered all the questions I have "why do I always catch myself staring at you?" "why do i feel so hopeless and vulnerable whenever it's you who comforts me?" "why does my heart feel so jumpy and lofty at the sight of you?" it was love:D
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heartfelt, alright!
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