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| Dave & Death | |
| By Cassidy | ||||
| 23 March 2005 | ||||
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FADE IN: INT. A FRONT ROOM - DAY DAVE, a man in his mid-twenties to early thirties, is sitting watching Television. The camera will pan up from behind the TV to show DAVE looking face on looking at the TV. His room is slightly messy, but not bad - for a bloke. The programme that he is watching is non-descript, occasional CANNED LAUGHTER can be heard. We only see the light from the TV illuminating the room and his face, as the curtains are shut. DAVE, a man in his mid-twenties to early thirties, is sitting watching Television. The camera will pan up from behind the TV to show DAVE looking face on looking at the TV. His room is slightly messy, but not bad - for a bloke. The programme that he is watching is non-descript, occasional CANNED LAUGHTER can be heard. We only see the light from the TV illuminating the room and his face, as the curtains are shut. Suddenly there is a KNOCK at the door. DAVE gets up and goes across the room to answer it. When DAVE opens the door he is confronted by a tall black cloaked figure holding a scythe - it is DEATH. DAVE DEATH nods. DAVE DEATH tilts head to one side. DAVE DEATH nods and walks into the room. DAVE DEATH nods so DAVE hangs it up somehow. Then DAVE tidies up the sofa, so that DEATH can sit down. DAVE DEATH and DAVE sit down on the sofa. After a short pause in which DAVE tries to watch the TV, DAVE tries to talk to DEATH. DAVE DEATH looks at DAVE. DAVE then passes DEATH the TV guide. DEATH then starts reading through the TV guide. DAVE DEATH nods. DAVE opens the crisps and DEATH grabs a few before opening his can of beer. DAVE DEATH stops drinking his beer and starts crying. DAVE puts his arm around him. DAVE DAVE then gets DEATH a tissue. DEATH wipes his eyes. DAVE then sits down again. DEATH then looks at him and gives him a big hug.DAVE and DEATH then stop and look at each other. They then stand up together. CUT TO:EXT. A PARK - DAYLIGHT DAVE and DEATH are walking along arm-in-arm. Suddenly DAVE stops borrows DEATH's scythe and runs OUT OF SHOT. A after a pause he returns with some freshly cut flowers.CUT TO: MONTAGE of DAVE and DEATH walking through the PARK holding hands. On the swings. Lying on the grass laughing.CUT TO: Final shot of DEATH and DAVE pushing a pram through the PARK. They stop and DEATH reaches down to tickle the BABY. Then DEATH and DAVE walk arm-in-arm into the sunset pushing the pram. FADE OUT. THE END.
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