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if you were mine
By -jellyacey-
17 February 2007
about mr second entry..SORRY..the intro was longer than the poem:C annyway..scribbles...i like scribbles [puts on a "sinister smile"]

If you were mine..
my heart would never cry..
though you'd hurt me..


If you were mine...
I wouldn't ask for anything else..
'coz I have you..


If you were mine...
nothing in this world would be the same..
It would be better:D

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Don't bet on this
Written by Josie (2496 comments posted) 18th February 2007
Don't raise false hopes because you will be disappointed.

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