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Poetry
confusion
By darkrose12
17 February 2007
i just made this with all the emotion i have for he one that i can't love... it's free verse

here i am beside you
why can't i say the truth
that though i love u so dear
i have to hide because of fear

when will the day come
that i could say you're the one
who keeps all my worries and troubles away
who will never leave me no matter

all of thse i really desire
but because of the world
am all alone inside
wanting u to be by my side

when will the day come that you'll love me
for everything that i am and not to be
but whatever happens i know you'll be there
to care and comfort me but as a friend

i know you'll never see me the way i do
i just hope that you won't leave me here
go our seperate ways 
and never com back

i hope that you'll see 
that my love is so real
you're the only one i'll ever love
i just hope that you won't pretend

 

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