Great Writing - Home > Poetry > Untitled Still -- A working progress
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1667 guests online and 5 members online
Poetry
Untitled Still -- A working progress
By rilLie
18 February 2007
I haven't written anything I really liked lately. This isn't really done yet, too. Ack.. My muses died on me. :(

A friend had lent me this book, Quiver. It was amazing. :) It's really nice. It's greek mythology and it was about Atalanta, named the fastest mortal alive. Hipommenes (sp?) fell inlove with her and did a full prostration to Aphrodite so that he can have her. He did. This is his POV.

hope you like...

I hear voices,
but you're all I see,
the outside's blocked,
this is our world.


If I had wished for anything,
it had been you.
And I have you.
And I love you.

Reviews

Written by rilLie (328 comments posted) 17th February 2007
i feel really bad.. :x

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item