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By jean.day
18 February 2007
This comes from a book which I originally found at my work place library in Evanston. It has the most wonderful poems about the birth of her baby - and I was pregnant at the time, so made a copy and kept it and sent it to each new baby I encounter. But yesterday I found her entire book is on the internet. I will see if I can give you the reference.It is the story of an American who married an aristocratic Englishman, he is killed in the first world war, she has a baby after he has dies but feels she has to bring him up in England because he is the heir to the property.And then later when he is grown and about to go off to the second world war, she is very loathe to let him go.

http://www.eliteskills.com/analysis_poetry/The_White_Cliffs_by_Alice_Duer_Miller_analysis.php


When the sun shines on England, it atones
For low-hung leaden skies, and rain and dim
Mist, fogs that paint the verdure on her stones
And fill her gentle rivers to the brim.

When the sun shines on England, shafts of light
Fall on far towers and hills and dark old trees
And hedge bound meadows of a green as bright
As bright as is the blue of tropic seas.

When the sun shines, it is as if the face
Of some proud man relaxed his haughty stare
And smiles upon us with a sudden grace,
Flattering because its coming is so rare.


*****
What a voice he had - gentle, profound,
Clear masculine. I melted at the sound.

Oh, those English voices, are there any words
Those tones to tell, those cadences to teach.
As songs of thrushes is to other birds,
So English voices are to other speech;

Those pure round “o”s those lovely liquid “l”s
Ring in the ear like sounds of Sabbath bells.

Yet I have loathed those voices when the sense
Of what they said seemed to insolence
As if the dominance of the whole nation
Lay in that clear correct enunciation.

And presently she says, as they
Sooner or later always say:
“You're an American,  Miss Dunne?
Really you do not speak like one.”

She seemed to think she’d said a thing
Both courteous and flattering.
I answered, through my wrists were weak
With anger; “Not at all, I speak,
At least I’ve always thought this true,
As educated people do
In any country - even mine.”
“Really,” I saw her head incline.

I saw her ready to assert
Americans are easily hurt.



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Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 18th February 2007
This is interesting, Jean. I get this all the time. 'You're an American? Oh!' And that 'Oh!' can mean so many things, including 'But you seem so nice!' 'Where's your gun, then?' 'But you don't look a bit like a raving rednecked KKK sympathizer.' And so on.  
 
I never pretend to be anything than an American. What I am is what I am. I do find blatant anti-Americanism depressing, especially when it is based on ignorance. I resent it when people assume that all Americans are loud-mouthed materialists who are politically conservative. But then I find blatant anti-anything depressing, and a lot of Americans certainly give as good as they get.  
 
Some years ago, we had an American guest at our B&B wearing a tee shirt with an American flag on it. I saw it and flinched -- I hate all that flag-waving jingoism -- but then I saw, printed under it, the following message: PROUD OF MY COUNTRY, ASHAMED OF MY GOVERNMENT. I tried to buy the shirt from him, but he wouldn't sell it; he told me that he needed it for the rest of his trip around Europe. I felt like I needed it for the rest of the time I planned to live here -- but never mind, it was his shirt. It could sure have saved me a lot of talking, though: when some people hear my accent and learn that I am American, they tend to want to find out my political views, and that shirt could have spoken for me . . .  
 
Interesting poem, Jean -- thanks for thinking of me!

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