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By sara
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23 June 2005 |
I want
someone to know
what I'm feeling
I need
moaning, groaning
and heavy breathing
I want
someone to understand
my sin
I need
raunch, intensity
and skin against skin
I want
someone to help me
with dreaming
I need
excitement, lust
and passionate screaming
I want
someone to trust
despite our own ties
I need
someone who can live
through the lies
I want
someone who doesn't
question after
I need
friendship, sex
and howling laughter |
Written by darrenmc (54 comments posted) 24th June 2005 | | you are so honest and expressive, and yes the poem is fantastic, it seems like like the sort of inspirational thing you would have wrote very quickly with few edits, pure creativity.. | Excellent
Written by LaughterLines (34 comments posted) 26th June 2005 | I want
someone to trust
despite our own ties
I need
someone who can live
through the lies
Yes I agree, this is such an honest piece of poetry indeed. Excellent work.
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Written by alandavidpritchard (59 comments posted) 30th June 2005 | | a hugely enjoyable poem - thank you |
Written by no1butClo (341 comments posted) 18th July 2007 | | Sorry I can't be of more use, but this is a great thing to read. Thankyou |
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