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Station Road - Chapter 8
By Phil
21 February 2007
Chapter eight.

“Hello Ted,” said Billy.  “I’ve just come across to say sorry for being grumpy yesterday.  I can still call you Ted can’t I?”

 Well, I was lost for words.  I mean, not half an hour ago I was on the verge of storming across the road to have it out with Billy and his family, and now here he was asking if he could still call me Ted.  Looking at him I could see nothing but hope and it was then that I realised what a fool I’d been.  Just looking at his open face told me it couldn’t have Billy.  He was as innocent and good as I’d always thought.  I don’t mind telling you I felt ashamed of myself then and I still do to this day.

 “You alright Mr. Brown?  You don’t look too good.”

 “Ted.  Call me Ted.  Yes I’m fine.  At least I will be.  Come in.  We’ll have some squash and biscuits.”

 Billy’s face lit up.  I could tell he was pleased I didn’t bear a grudge for his sulleness the day before.  He made straight for the parlour while I got the drinks.

 “Mrs. Pugh was round.  I saw her,” said Billy as soon as I got back to him.  “She’s always blaming me for things I’ve not done she is.”

 Of course this made me feel even worse.  I suppose I ought to have come clean there and then and told him what I had been thinking.  After all, there shouldn’t be secrets between friends, but I couldn’t bring myself to do it.

 Billy took a long pull at his drink and picked up a biscuit.  His eyes roved the room over the top of the glass.  They came to rest where we’d left the jewellery box the other day.

 “You moved your treasures then Ted?” he asked.

 “Not exactly Billy.  I think I’ve been burgled.”

 He sat up bolt upright but I didn’t pay him much more attention for a while.  You see, the combination of guilt at thinking Billy had been responsible for stealing my things and the relief I felt when I realised it wasn’t him, had stopped me asking the obvious question.  If it wasn’t Billy who took the box, then who was it?  And then I knew.  This time I really knew.

 “Ted, Ted?  You alright?” asked Billy.  He looked pretty worried.  I suppose I had been miles away with a funny look on my face.  That and the fact that I’d recently been crying probably made me look rather strange.

 “Yes Billy.  I’m fine.  In fact I feel a lot better.  Now tell me.  The other day when you and Hugh came round.  What did he say when he left?  If I remember rightly, I was making drinks and when I got back he’d gone.”

 Billy looked a bit confused.  I think the conversation was going a bit fast for him.  But he closed his eyes and thought.

 “He didn’t say anything.  I went up to the loo and when I came down he’d gone, then you came in with our drinks.  Why?”

 Poor Billy, sat there being grilled and probably with a hundred questions of his own.  After all, it’s not everyday your friend gets robbed.  I could tell he was dying to ask but before he could get another word in I was up out of my chair and taking his glass off him.

 “No offence Billy.  But I need half an hour on my own to think.  Don’t think I’m cross with you for yesterday.  It’s always a pleasure to see you.  If you promise to come back in an hour I’ll tell you all about it,” I said all this while I was walking to the kitchen, glasses in one hand, a plate of biscuits in the other.

 “I’ll be off then Ted,” he said with a confused look on his face.  He probably thought I was going batty.  “You sure you’re not mad at me for taking off yesterday?”

 “No Billy.  I couldn’t have been more pleased to see you this afternoon.” 

And that was the truth.  There’s no telling what silly things I might have done if he’d not turned up on my doorstep like that. 

“Just give me an hour.  Perhaps when you come back we’ll go for a walk and I’ll tell you what’s on my mind.”

 Billy seemed happy with this and he was off through the door with a smile on his face.




So, what did I need to think over?  I’d had a flash of inspiration but this time I wanted to make sure I wasn’t jumping to the wrong conclusion again.

 What facts did I know?  There were no broken windows or forced doors, so no-one had broken into my house.  I’m very particular about locking up when I go out and even when I’m in the house I keep the doors locked.  You don’t want people just wandering in off the street.  I know I would have noticed if I’d not locked the door because when I came home I wouldn’t have had to unlock the door.  That meant no-one had just tried my door by chance and snuck in.  That left the windows.  Those I had shut half way through last week.  We were having a sunny spell but it was the tail end of September and my old bones start to feel the cold even then.  Even so.  I thought I’d better check.  I walked around the few rooms of my small house and sure enough, every window was fasted shut.  So, no-one climbed in through the window.  

 This only left one possibility.  It had to be someone I’d let in the house myself.  The only two people were Billy and Hugh.  Now I knew it wasn’t Billy.  I knew at last that he wasn’t capable of that kind of thing.  Besides that, even though I was starting to feel the cold, Bill’s only young.  Tight jeans and a T-shirt doesn’t leave you anywhere to hide a box that’s roughly the size of a brick.  

 I went through it again and again.  The only logical explanation was that Hugh had taken the box when I was in the kitchen and Billy was upstairs.  Hugh Pugh.

 The problem was; what was I going to do about it?

Reviews
Getting into it
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3445 comments posted) 21st February 2007
I think the story is really hitting it's stride now. There was a terrrific narrative drive to this chapter. I just raced through it. I think it helps that it is so unambiguous and easy to follow. I'm sure kids will find it great reading. 
The dialogue between Billy and Ted was excellent and helped to break up the chapter. I particularly enjoyed Ted's detective work to try and work out the culprit.It added real tension and drama. 
I would have preferred it if Ted had included Billy in his thinking and they could have solved it together. [Ithink it might appeal to kids] That way they could have reached the conclusion through dilalogue. But I expect it wouldn't work in with the story. So I'll just wait for the next one and stop making silly suggestions 
Really good work 
J
P.S
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3445 comments posted) 21st February 2007
Forgot to say,you left out a "been" in the second chapter 
Didnt spot anything else. I usually leave it to Witzl she much better than me 
J
Hi Phil
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 21st February 2007
Well, Ted's back into my good books again. It was a good chapter, and I think you made him suitable embarrassed and upset. And he didn't need to apologise as he hadn't made his thoughts known to anyone. 
 
 
I wonder if you meant fasted shut - or maybe fastened shut. 
 
Were Hugh Pugh's clothes sufficiently loose to make it easy to hide a package the size of a brick? I can't remember.

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 22nd February 2007
I knew it, I knew it! But indeed, what's he going to do about it? Looking forward to chapter 9.

Written by Phil (6836 comments posted) 22nd February 2007
Thanks for the comments. All useful. Having trouble with nine and ten. I know what's going to happen. Written them both a couple of times, but they're not working well at all. May be a bit of a break.

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 26th February 2007
My own kids are such practiced, first-class liars and so brilliant at convincing people of their innocence in the event of a crime that I personally want some more convincing proof that Billy didn't do it -- some accidental alibi on his part, say -- but that is just me, the not-so-proud mother of two accomplished deceivers.  
 
Yes -- you did leave out a 'been' there, Phil ('Just looking at his open face told me that it couldn't have BEEN Billy'), and Jean also caught the 'fasted' shut; for a minute I wondered if this weren't some interesting British use of 'fast' as a verb. Or is it? 
 
This really is moving along at a good pace and I am enjoying it. I agree with Jane that kids would love it if Billy got involved in trying to nail Hugh for the theft, but you are telling this story, so I will hush up.
great!
Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 20th March 2007
The others have said all there is to say. i'm really loving the story and being drawn into it now. Looking forward to more! :)  
p.s- glad Ted promptly jumped off the band wagon.
Here, here!
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 23rd August 2007
What can he do about it? Keep reading - - - -

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