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Highway Robbery
By bwoz
22 February 2007
The story of Mary Young, a.k.a Jenny Diver.  She was one of England's most successful pick-pockets, and notoriously popular. She was finally hanged for "Highway Robbery", a trumped up charge, as normal petty larceny was not a capitol offense. But it was the only charge she could be hung for.  When she was sentenced the news spread "like fire" through the streets.  At least, thats what I read. I apologize for any cliches. 

A parade passed to Tyburn Tree  
Down around old Oxford Street.
The sentence ran out like fire  
Then dimmed to embers’ blue heat.
On coffins they made them ride,
Three wagons of men and thee.

Every head in town was cocked
Every table at King’s Lance heaped.
Pray tell, what will thee have dear,
a schooner and a quick bite to eat?
When the embers at last caught air
Their breath ignited the street.

The frenzy was loath to discover
A woman; to settle the quell
She rode a coach to Tyburn  
Against the tolling of St. Sepulchre's bells.
For show, she smiled and waved
In all her finery, they tell.

The crowds at Oxford stood to cheer
As alone, Mary passed to the Tree
Her drop measured 18 inches, I hear
‘Tis the end of highway robbery.

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Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 22nd February 2007
I am delighted to see this type of approach represented here. I thought that the image of the 'heated' message of the sentence being like fire escaping and running riot was great. 'Their breath ignited the street' worked very well too. 
 
I am always embarrassed to be critical but just thought that phrase 'and a quick bite to eat' sounded like a modernism amongst the traditional language that you used for the rest of the poem. I think that this was exectly the right way to deal with the subject matter though. I enjoyed this very much though. 
 
Kathy
Thanks
Written by bwoz (125 comments posted) 22nd February 2007
Thank you Kathy, 
 
I will definitely think of a more traditional way to say "have something to eat"...of course I want to keep the rhyme there if possible.  
 
I kind of wrote this one backward -- for a long time the first stanza was the entire poem and I tried to write something that led to the men being hauled off to Tyburn Tree in a wagon riding on their coffins. Once I decided that was a better start the rest only took about two months ;o). 
 
Thanks for reading and comment. 
 
BW

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