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I Just Can't
By rilLie
23 February 2007
sort of problem going on.. and at school, we've been having confirmation practices ALL WEEK... I haven't been online that much because when I get home, I'd fall asleep immediately and wake up the following morning, still soooo sleepy. XD I can't take that anymore. And anyways, tomorrow is already our Confirmation, and I must admit, I am somehow excited, even if my classmates aren't. :D
please forgive me for my emo-nessness lately... I think I'm coming down with a fever.
attack as you please. :D

Even now that
I can't hold on,
to what I need,
will you laugh?

That I can't
even grasp upon
the thing I want
the most.

Would you
point and laugh
and call your friends
to laugh with you?

I know you would
I'm sure of that
because you know
that I need you.

No matter how much
I want to shatter
that image of you
in my dreams,

I just can't...

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To What you Need
Written by Josie (2496 comments posted) 23rd February 2007
Hello RiLie - Of course, we don't know what it is that you want to hold on to. I would say that as long as what you want most is the thing which is important to you, and it is something you can achieve in life, you should not only hang on, but strive to get it. But if it involves striving to get another person, that is another thing. In this case, there are two of you. You can't make others do what you want to do. Hope that my advice as an agony aunt makes sense.

Written by rilLie (324 comments posted) 23rd February 2007
it does. :grin and thanks. 
 
rai :)

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