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Haiku - Irked.
By Phil
25 February 2007
A haiku in form, but not in spirit. More of a motto I suppose.

The agenda of
Another always appears
To take precedence.

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Written by Fledermaus (3492 comments posted) 25th February 2007
Heheheh... So true!
Hi Phil
Written by jean.day (2369 comments posted) 26th February 2007
It's good. I like it. I have never tried to write a Haiku. 
 
But in a way it sounds kind of bitter.

Written by ellipinnock (1790 comments posted) 26th February 2007
Jean's right - it does sound bitter - not sure whether that was what you intended. Not a haiku in spirit but thought-provoking nonetheless. 
 
As an aside - I would always have said 'take precedence' - was under the impression that you only used 'precedent' when talking about legal whatsits. Am I being daft? Godammit, where's witzl when you need her! 
 
Cheers, 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 26th February 2007
You're quite right Elli. Off to change it now. Thanks. 
 
Phil.

Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 27th February 2007
Hmmm. Always "appears" to take precedence - so its a matter of perception. 
 
I would go so far as to say that the agendas of others often "do" take precedence. In a strong V weak, rich V poor world, it has always been thus. 
 
Resigned realism. Nothing wrong with that, so long as it doesn't turn into depression. 
 
Oli :)
Not necessarily true
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 27th February 2007
Another person's agenda doesn't take precedence when you are retired. Then you claim more time of your own! But as a mother, with small children, you are absolutely right because the agendas of the little others always seem to take precedence.!
My life
Written by bwoz (125 comments posted) 3rd March 2007
That describes my entire work day/week. Everybody has a need, and their priority is higher than everyone elses -- and, oh by the way, "they" want you in a meeting right now. 
 
Yeah, this does lay a truth out. 
BW

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