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Richmond Castle 1916
By CliffBowes
27 February 2007
16 Conscientious objectors from Durham and N.Yorks. were placed in the Non-Combatant Corp in 1916. They refused to wear uniforms, drill or perform any work touching the war effort. They were placed in cells in Richmond Castle. Eager to make an example of these men they were sent to France, where disobeying an order in the face of the enemy was punishable by death by firing squad. They were found guilty and sentenced to death. This was then commuted to 10 years hard labour. On their return to civilian life after completing their sentence they were socially ostracised.


 


Silent sentinel of this Northern Dale,
Feet washed clean by the tumbling Swale.
Clinging to skirts of a National Park
History cruel and often dark.

Stone castle cold, what do you care
For pacifists imprisoned there?
For their beliefs and heartfelt views.
With hope you did their blood infuse.

Sixteen young men refused to fight
Or work to aid the army’s might.
In World War One they lost their battle:
Reluctant guests of Richmond Castle.

Ferried to France to defend their case
At a tribunal, biased and base,
Sentenced to death by firing squad
Reduced to ten years; justice roughshod.

The cells remain, graffiti strewn,
Picture of Mother on stones rough hewn,
Protecting her son as he sleeps in his cell.
Confuter of war and trenches from hell.

Strong castle of Richmond with tales to relate
Look on this town through your massive keep gate
You stand now in splendour, ruined but proud.
Guarding the wild river valley unbowed.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 1st March 2007
I like this Cliff, a lot actually, but I think there are two pieces trying to get out out here. There's one about the men (which might mention Richmond Castle) and one about the castle itself. Really liked the 'feet washed clean' image. 
 
Phil.
Richmond Castle
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
Congratulations on a well written poem Cliff. The castle was well portrayed and the sad story came over well. I thought your rhythm and rhyme in this poem were good. the only improvement (as a former teacher of typewriting) would be that you indent three spaces for the rhyming lines. Otherwise, very good indeed.

Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 4th March 2007
It is a great thing that you have shown an empathy for these poor men whose courage we can see now. It must have been so awful for their mothers and families. I wonder what happened to them eventually? 
 
A fitting tribute and very sympathetically made. 
 
Kathy 

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