I read a Neil Gaiman interview, where he talked about writing as the only way he could stop stories from bouncing around his head for ever. And it touched a chord with me. I have had little stories and fantasies filling my imagination, sometimes for years. I write them down, and there they are, gone.
Another idea arrived. Honestly, what was he expected to do with all these new ideas? Some days they would all come rushing at once. Other times he could go days without seeing one.
This idea fluttered into the room he used as his office through the open window. He was busy. He really had to study the latest version of the software. Next week he would have to give a presentation on it.
The idea fluttered around the light shade. How stupid was that? The light wasn’t even switched on. It was distracting him. Bloody ideas!
He had just got to the important bit about the new admin utilities within the software when the idea fluttered onto the desk in front of him, demanding attention.
He sighed. It was not going to go away until he had dealt with it. He put aside his manual and looked hard at the idea. It was ordinary. No spectacular impact, no original design. It was quite ordinary, in fact. Very similar to a million other ideas he had seen.
It moved across the desk, turning this way and that. It was an OK idea, as far as it went. Not bad for a beginner, maybe. But really…
Then the idea turned, and he saw the quite spectacular twist in its tail. Now, that was unusual. He reached up to the shelf and opened the large scrap book. There, neatly pressed, dried and pinned to the pages, was his collection. One day he would have to sort through it and categorize all the ideas here. At present, all he did was preserve them in the order that they arrived. That wouldn’t do. They should be arranged in some official order. By category, perhaps, or in order of commercial viability.
Next he took down the net and the jar. Carefully, so as not to scare it away (a common fault he had in his early days) he brought the net closer and closer. Then in one swift movement he had it netted. He held it flat on the desk, the netting holding the fragile wings spread. Under the magnifying glass he examined it, the lines, the colour, the flow of the patterns. Yes, a remarkable tail, totally out of character from its body. A twist you wouldn’t really expect.
He carefully emptied the net into the large glass jar, dropped the impregnated clump of cotton wool in with it and tightly screwed the lid shut. Afterwards, when it was quite still, he took it out again and painstakingly pinned it to the page. As often was the case, its wings seemed a little less vibrant, the colours a little greyer, now it was on the page rather than flitting around the room. But what could he do? If he didn’t pin them there the little buggers would fly around his head for ever.
He sighed again, and turned back to the manual.
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Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
What a funny idea -- that our ideas are like moths or butterflies and must be trapped and pinned down if we don't want them out of control. This amused me no end, though it also disturbed me. You pin the pesky idea down by fleshing it all out into a story -- and in the process manage to ruin its vibrancy. There is more than a grain of truth in this notion of yours, I suspect. Does anyone else have the problem of being kept awake at night by ideas and plots? There are times I wouldn't mind having a bottle of chlorophyll and a couple of pins myself. |
Hi Snodlander Written by jean.day (2283 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
I really liked this idea. But my problem these days, is that the wonderful ideas I get, if I don't manage to write them down right away, flit away, never to be found again. Yes, Witzl, I get ideas for things I am writing while in bed - but the thing to do is to allow yourself to dream about them. Then you go to sleep, and as long as you can remember your dreams, you are okay. |
Written by anorwegianwood (278 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
I think this is brilliant. At first I was just thinking it was interesting, but not terribly exciting. Then I got to the scrapbook. Perfect touch, truly the twist in the tail. Claire |
Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
It was exciting to personnify the idea as being like a creature that you would catch and preserve. I really liked this a lot. Do you know The Thought Fox poem by Ted Hughes (I think) it is one of my favourites and I won't spoilt it just incase you don't know it... he uses a similar idea and it is so beautifully crafted that it makes me shivver every time I read it. Well done Kathy |
Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
'Oops' personify even! K |
Written by Phil (6731 comments posted) 2nd March 2007 |
Good idea, well delivered. I have the opposite problem. My ideas bugger off as soon as they arrive. Like Jean, I have to write at least something down to keep the essence of it. Same process, different reason. Not just a good idea: a very clever idea. Thanks for the read. Phil. |
Written by Livinginanattic (456 comments posted) 3rd March 2007 |
| Enjoyed this, well worth the read. I still tend to scare the ideas away and they definitely seem less vibrant once they are on the page. |
Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 3rd March 2007 |
Really liked this Snods. Not got a lot to add apart from what has already been said. On the occasions when mine do wake me up in the night they never stay until morning - they are starting to realise they may as well not bother and wait their turn until morning. Elli |
Written by Nicki (1 comments posted) 3rd March 2007 |
i really liked this story, and loved the image of ideas being like butterflys. i Just wish that i could catch ideas that easily.
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What a lovely idea Written by Leigh (226 comments posted) 5th March 2007 |
This is brilliant, and so different. You create such a surreally vivid picture of your frustrated narrator in this office environment swarming with insects/ideas. Your conclusion is nicely sad. I know what you mean about stories sometimes seeming a little greyer once they are on the page - the thrill being in the 'catch' as it were. |
good Written by JeffFernandez (9 comments posted) 6th March 2007 |
| Good and enjoyed this and having that problem at the moment |
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