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C'EST TOI!
By JohnnyD
02 March 2007
C’EST TOI!

 
C’EST TOI A QUI JE PENSAIS TOUJOURS

DANS MON REVE OU PENDANT QUE JE TRAVAILLAIS

TOUT LE TEMPS, C’EST TOI, TOI ET SEULEMENT TOI!

PEUT-ETRE TU SAIS BIEN POURQUOI?

 
TU ES MA VIE ET MON AMOUR

ET JE T’AIME BEAUCOUP

C’EST TRES DIFFICILE MAINTENANT

DE VIVRE SANS TOI, O MA CHERIE!

 
AVANT MA VIE ETAIT TRES DIFFERENTE

MAIS MAINTENANT IL Y A DE LA JOIE DANS MA VIE

CAR TU AS AMENE DE LA JOIE ET AUSSI DE LA JOUISSANCE

TU ME FAIS SENTIR TRES SPECIAL

 
MA VIE AS CHANGE GRACE A TOI

ET J’AI RENCONTRE HEUREUSEMENT

C’EST TOI QUI AS CHANGE MA VIE

AVEC VOTRE AMOUR ET AFFECTION

 
COMMENT JE TE DIS?

COMMENT TU AS CHANGE MA VIE?

IL N’Y A PAS DE MOTS POUR DECRIRE

CAR MAINTENANT JE SUIS TRES CONTENT DE MA VIE

 
QUELQUE FOIS JE PENSE QUE

SI TU N’ES PAS ARRIVE DANS MA VIE

COMMENT MA VIE SERAIT?

SANS TOI, JOIE, L’AMOUR ET BONHEUR!

 
JE TE DIS MERCI

POUR AMENER LA VIE DANS MON MONDE

ET POUR CHANGER MON MONDE COMME CA

AUSSI POUR TOUTES LES CHOSES QUE TU M’AS DONNE

 
LA FILLE COMME TOI EST TRES DIFFICILE A TROUVER

DANS LE MONDE TRES CRUEL

MAIS JE CROIS QUE JE SUIS TRES FORTUNE

CAR JE TE TROUVE COMME MA CHERIE

 
MA CHERIE QUI ME FAIT SENTIR A L’AISE

ET QUI M’AIME BEAUCOUP

AUSSI QUI EST MA VIE ET MON AMOUR

C’EST TOI, TOI, SEULEMENT TOI!


Johnny D

1200 Hours

08th March 1994

 
 

Reviews
Non ho capito questa poesia Johnny
Written by Josie (2788 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
E possible per scrivere in inglese per favore?

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
It's nice to see how your French poems seem to improve each time. What a way to learn a language! They're of course not what your English poems are, but then, how long have you been learning French? 
 
Yet it would be nice if you wouldn't write it in capitals. In most word processors you can assign shortkeys to letters like é, è, â or ç. Secondly, as this is a British site, it'd be handy to put in a translation for those who don't read French.  
It's great they allow poems in languages other than English, but as there are people from all over the world here you can't expect them to know every language.

Written by Phil (6731 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
Actually, even with my limited French, I got the majority of this. Very repetitive.

Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
Je peut parle Francais plus bien que je peut l'ecrire mais j'avais aimer 'C'est Tois'. C'est tres heureux que vous avez trouvez l'amour et une femme q'ui vous aimez aussi. 
Kathy

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