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A WORTHY SMILE!
By JohnnyD
02 March 2007
A WORTHY SMILE!

You look so cute when you smile
Spreading the joy as long as the Nile
Not knowing for a while
How much your smile is worthwhile?

You smile and spread joy all the while
Making people imagine the beautiful Nile
Not knowing exactly
How much your smile is worthwhile?

Your smile spreads all around cheerfulness
So people can also smile with you forgetting their woes
Like always, you do smile not knowing
How much your smile is worthwhile?


Johnny D
8th January 1995

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Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
 
NOT MY POEM 
 
 
SMILING 
 
by Ricky D. Claar 
 
Smiling is infectious - you can catch it like the flu. 
When someone smiled at me, I started smiling too. 
When I passed the corner, someone saw my grin. 
When he smiled, I realized I had passed it onto him. 
 
Then I thought about that smile and realized its worth. 
A single smile, just like mine, could travel round the earth. 
So, if you feel a smile begin, don't leave it undetected. 
Let's start an epidemic quick and get the world infected. 
 
 

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
Jesus Johnny, they're getting worse, not better. I'm running out of balanced things to say.  
 
Phil

Written by Kathy (220 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
D'ont think much of this one, sorry. 
Kathy
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Written by patterjack (1159 comments posted) 2nd March 2007
... dropped into the Nile -- to see if the crocs could digest it -- i certainly couldn!t !  
 
patterjack

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