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The Gentleman
By Cherry26
28 June 2005
He walked out with nothing
  but the steely set of his back
As if posture could remove
  the humiliation of begging for love

He told his friend later
   in confidence

That he would have groveled for love
  but groveling was the same as leaving
He would have cried for love
  but his cries would have only moved himself

She's a piece of stone
  he said
Who would imagine 
  that I would love a piece of stone

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thought provoking
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 29th June 2005
good use of images
Excellent
Written by LaughterLines (34 comments posted) 30th June 2005
Hi, I agree with Kevin, the imagery in this poem is great. 
I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the read. 
 
LL :)

Written by alandavidpritchard (59 comments posted) 30th June 2005
an intriguing piece, this -

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