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| Solo Dance of the Birthday Boy | |
| By CarlHalling | ||
| 06 March 2007 | ||
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The following piece which I have elected to call "Solo Dance of the Birthday Boy", was compiled on the 21st of May 2006, using, as raw material, a few hastily scrawled notes commemorating a birthday recently celebrated in the early '90s and possibly dating from the 8th of October 1992 or '91 or even earlier, I cannot be certain. What is certain is that it has been reproduced word for word, although slightly edited, and of course subject to free versification. This is no tale of a carefree Corinthian, far from it, for there is a distinctly twilight mood to the piece, with the birthday boy blithely performing his fatuous solo dance in the teeth of the disaster he is so clearly courting. Yesterday... for my birthday, I started off the day with a bottle of wine... I took the train into town... I had half a bitter at the Cafe de Piaf in Waterloo... I went to work for a couple of hours or so; I had a pint after work; I went for an audition; after the audition, I had another pint and a half; I had another half, before meeting my mates, for my b'day celebrations; we had a pint together; we went into the night club, where we had champagne (I had three glasses); I had a further glass of vino, by which time, I was so gone that I drew an audience of about thirty by performing a solo dancing spot in the middle of the disco floor... We all piled off to the pub after that, where I had another drink (I can't remember what it was)... I then made my way home, took the bus from Surbiton, but ended up in the wilds of Surrey; I took another bus home, and watched some telly and had something to eat before crashing out... I really, really enjoyed the eve, but today, I've been walking around like a zomb; I've had only one drink today, an early morning restorative effort; I spent the day working, then I went to a bookshop, where, like a monk, I go for a day's drying out session... Drying out is really awful; you jump at every shadow; you feel dizzy, you notice everything; very often, I don't follow... through...
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