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Poetry
Screw you
By maipenrai
30 June 2005

When the last time we met

you told me that I was not worthy of your love

that it would be best

that I go away

and Die, slowly, painfully

 

and for the life of me

and all my love for you

I cannot understand

such anger from you

after all my sin was only

one night of drunken passion

when I took your

sister, mother and brother

and it was only a sin of the flesh

not of my sacred mind

 

so screw you bitch

your sisters coming around tonight

again

Reviews

Written by alandavidpritchard (59 comments posted) 30th June 2005
I do so enjoy tonal poems, and this had me grinning from the start ...it's delicious
look at what you have done
Written by alandavidpritchard (59 comments posted) 30th June 2005
i like poems with bite ...and this one left marks - and a huge grin on my face
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 30th June 2005
thanks mate, glad you liked it 
bernie

Written by sara (29 comments posted) 7th July 2005
Loved this poem, cutting.
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 7th July 2005
thanks sara
I love it
Written by bloodange77 (38 comments posted) 19th March 2006
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! it kind of sounds like someone I used to know. I like it, this one drew blood.

Written by peeano1 (86 comments posted) 7th November 2006
Very interesting.....Liked it from the start, just by looking at the title...reminded me of someone I used to know...very catchy...
reminds me of...
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 10th January 2007
education for leisure by carline duffy in a funny sort of way 
 
like it lots =)

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