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Poetry
rainbows
By alandavidpritchard
30 June 2005
In the beginning, a wind blew through the darkness,
and colours, hidden by night, suddenly grew
where there was light -
and bright they shone: red, yellow, blue:
A carnival of colours,
some bright and some odd -
dancing to a tune written by God.
But then:
when mankind found rainbows
he was blind to their sheen,
and saw, instead,
the gold in between,
or at the end, he wasn't sure -
he tried to bend the rainbow till it tore,
till it broke, till he saw
only the colours of his own greed:
green for envy, purple for spite -
red for hearts that bleed.
Why do we always keep colours apart?
a blue team here, a yellow there, let's not start
on black and white for goodness sake.
in the playground of life it is a mistake
to believe what we have been told:
Rainbows are not about gold
or treasure or things of sorrow,
but about hopes and dreams
and the promise of tomorrow.
God's promise echoes through the years:
believe in rainbows, not greed nor fears -
believe and you will soon come to see
that rainbows are colours in harmony.
Open your eyes, open your ears -
listen to the colourful music of the spheres.

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Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 19th January 2006
It seems like an opening to the planets orchestral pieces. As a christian i empathise with this completely, adn i really like teh way it addresses the reader. good stuff :)  
 
clo x

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