I've never written alternate history, but this could be a start ;)
The old kahn had allowed the Golden Horde to conquer the west all the way to the ocean. And so they did. General Qadan led a vast army of Turkic, Russian and Mongolian horeback archers into Poland and in the spring of the year of our Lord, 1241, his troops encountered the Christians.
Led by the duke of Poland, a magnificent army awaited the Mongols. There were Hospitalers, Templars and Teutonic knights. The finest soldiers of the Christian world were assembled on the fields of Legnica. But that dreadful day, when the mightiest armies of the world met, the crusaders were lured into a trap. The Mongols tried their proven tactics. It had worked when they conquered Samarkand, they had applied it succesfully in the Middle East, and again they would show their tactical superiority. What good was it to be chivalrous if you were conquering the world? Upon the advance of the Polish, Qadan ordered his troops to retreat. The Christian warriors pursued them and were already cheering their victory. They had beaten the mighty Mongols, the Scourge of God... So they thought...
A shower of arrows came down upon the Christian knights and in spite of their helmets and their chain mail, they fell. That day the soil of Poland turned red and the Teutonic order was nearly wiped out. Their armor was crushed under the hooves of Mongolian horses and the general had an ear cut off every fallen Westener, so he could count their numbers...
In reality the story ends here, for the Great Kahn of the Mongol Empire died and the conquest of the west was cancelled. But what if, what if Ogotai had not died? If Batu Kahn had ordered Qadan even further westward?
The Mongol hordes would advance into the Holy Roman Empire and lay waste to Prague. The Northern European Plains would be ideal for their horses and they would easily overrun Germany, the Low Countries and France, leaving a trail of destruction behind. The western kings would either subdue or fall and only the Alps and Pyrenees would have halted their advance.
Perhaps Italy would have been forced into vassalry and the Spanish, wedged in between the Mongols and the Moors would have had a hard time. They would have allied with either one of the two, becoming hardly more than a protectorate.
The English would have been isolated and the Angevinian kingdom would have been destroyed. Their civilization would have developed in Britain alone...
Scandinavia too would have been cut off from Europe and its Christianization could easily have been reversed. In the north a new Viking state would have evolved, but it would have been unable to attack the Mongol dominated mainland. Their new conquests would probably lead them to the Americas instead.
Ogotai would of course have died eventually, and the West might have become an independent Kahnate. The new leaders would probably convert to Christianity, but unlike in the real world, the relations with the Islamic world wouldn't have been so troublesome, for it is logical to assume that if the Mongols had crushed Europe, they would soon have conquered the Middle East as well, leaving only North Africa and Andalucia to the caliphs...
What would the world look like today if Ogotai had lived a decade longer?
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Indeed! Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 13th March 2007 |
"What if .... ?" is probably the premise we as writers most often start with/from [I'm never certain which Ablative preposition fits best!!] Be that as it may, your speculations provoke enough possible trends to open several very nasty cans of worms ..... I'm willing to bet that we wouldn't be speaking English as a major international language, for a start .... and the other Romance tongues [French, German, Italian, Spanish etc] probably would never have developed past the "grunting" stage. I think the Viking influence would have been stronger - at least in Northern Europe - and might have been the one force preventing the Mongol hordes from total world domination. The warlike Celts of Ireland would probably have been relatively safe, living on an island protected by a fair expanse of seas which the Mongols might not have been accustomed to negotiating: in fact, I suspect the Celts would have come out of any confrontation relatively well (they knocked seven sorts of s*** out of the Vikings, anyway!!! ) You've given me an idea for writing an alternative history of Europe .... care to work in tandem on the idea??? |
What then Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 13th March 2007 |
I love a good alternate reality and most of my serious work is based in parallel dimensions. What if you had removed the word 'WOULD' and replaced it with 'WAS'? What then? The Mongol hordes marched upon the Holy Roman Empire etc.. |
Written by NeilTollfree (51 comments posted) 13th March 2007 |
Fascinating stuff. Agree with a above though, I'd write it as if it were a genuine history. I'd imagine it would have a stronger impact like that. very enjoyable |
Written by Tusk (53 comments posted) 13th March 2007 |
I liked how historically accurate it was. "So they thought" was a bit cliche, but other than that it was super. |
Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 14th March 2007 |
Thanks everyone. Bagheera: That'd be a good idea, who knows what would have happened? I think the Mongol khanate wouldn't have lasted very long, as neither the Golden Horde in Russia, nor the Yuan dynasty in China ruled very long, but they would have left behind a legacy, similar to how Russia and Turkey were influenced by the Mongols. So indeed, it'd be nice to continue this Steve and Neil: You're right. It reads a bit difficultly in this tense. The simple past would have been better. Tusk: Thanks. Indeed I could have used a more original phrase there. I'm happy you all liked it so much. |
Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 15th March 2007 |
Interesting and thought provoking piece Fledermaus. Back to what you do best. I know very little of history outside the standard events I was taught at school so this was fascinating. Phil. |
Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 17th March 2007 |
| Thank you Phil. This might grow into something, but I'm not sure yet. |
Written by anorwegianwood (278 comments posted) 19th March 2007 |
If this keeps going I'll definitely read it. Good stuff! ~Claire |
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