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By Flippy_D
01 July 2005
I was very happy with this until I realised how much I had unwittingly paralleled Eliot's [i]Gerontion[/i]. I had read the poem a month or so previous, and I suppose it leaked into my head. So, I beg you not to take this poem too seriously. I cannot claim much originality.

Canute could not.
The weakest soul in the world
Sat crowned with a scented diadem,
Leaves slipping down his wrinkled head
To chuckle at him next to his ears.

The spin of wind out over the gulls,
The old gulls that wheel over flat sand
And the grey straights...
This wind has no skill.

And Neptune, crookéd, leaning on a staff
(For where is his trident now?)
Coughed,
Sniffed and turned away.

The King with wet ankles in the bay.

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a random (NOT FLIPPY D) said:
Written by Flippy_D (14 comments posted) 11th July 2005
I don't like to comment on other people's work; but i always look at the bits they say are crap. 
 
I should read more of your work, because, thinking about it 
 
i have no idea who you are
Eh?
Written by tamper (18 comments posted) 11th July 2005
Well who are you then? And how did you get access to Flippy_D's account?
Confused
Written by IPFaulkner (83 comments posted) 24th May 2006
I like this poem. It takes a couple of goes to get to the rythm of. Don't know if thats because its a rip off of Eliot or not. 
 
Don't know wether the self review is part of the "art" or not but its very weird in itself.  
 
IP

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