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Poetry
Awaken
By maipenrai
02 July 2005

Awaken him you say!

why?

is it not better to let him sleep

see, he is at rest

peaceful

better this the his rightous anger

his swift and bloody vengeance on those

who would disturb his sleep of eons

but be at peace yourself

for it will surely come to past

that when the time is right

he will awaken from his slumber

then we shall know the

anger and the vengeance of the

Forgotten One

and blood shall flow like

the Rivers of Babylon

no mercy shall be shown to those who

have tainted his name with mockery

your childrens heads shall hang

as a necklace around his bloody neck

your women his whores for eternity

and you

you who are not worthy of his love

you will watch forever the

eternal torment of your loved ones

Amen

Reviews
sobering
Written by kevinrobson73 (391 comments posted) 3rd July 2005
good use of imagery

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