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Retirement
By Josie
16 March 2007

We had a few hours with our little grandchildren yesterday (1 and 2 year olds - Daniel and Jessica).  We were pulled this way and that, we tossed them up and down,  ("Do it again, again!"  "More, More") and were shown what you can do with playdough nowadays etc.  Some people's dream?  We loved every tiring minute of it, and so did they.  We went to bed last night tired out.  And now I've got up this morning and written this poem, I ask the question:  Retirement?  What exactly does it mean?




     R - Retirement’s arrived – they stop paying you brass..
     E - Employment has gone and you’re put out to grass
     T - Time on your hands?  Well,  you may think so to start
     I -  Idle?   Try new hobbies –  writing or art.
     R -  Rest?  Not when grandchildren come on the scene
     E -  Enjoy them?   Yes – grandparenting’s some people's dream. 
     M -  Money?   Not if the taxman finds out that it's there.
     E -  Eat, drink and be happy – try to let down your hair.
     N -  Never think of old age.  Say:  “I’m  quite young inside.”
     T -  Then let retirement be something you take in your stride.











Copyright 2007
www.whiteheadm.co.uk


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Can't
Written by Talisker (1300 comments posted) 16th March 2007
Wait! 
 
I think that this is called an "Acrostic" or is it "a Cross-stitch" something like that anyway :grin  
 
Oli
Definitely cross-stitch
Written by Josie (2496 comments posted) 16th March 2007
Cross-stitch, for certain!

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 16th March 2007
I'll have to wait for retirement. If I live long enough I've another twenty-three years to go. Enjoying it fine now, but I know at some time in the next ten to fifteen years I'm going to run out of energy and motivation - and then what? 
 
I'm looking forward to a bit of peace. Wouldn't mind grand children, but on a strictly part-time basis. 
 
Glad you're enjoying yours Josie. 
 
Phil.

Written by Clifftown (619 comments posted) 17th March 2007
Great fun Josie - I enjoyed it, and happy that you are enjoying life with the grandchildren. I hope I am as lucky! 
 
(I got a letter from our company pension administrator the other day, telling me that I am eligible to retire in the year 2042!!!)

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