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Poetry
Thinking
By LilGryphMaster
23 March 2005

This is another poem about love. Just wrote it one day when I was feeling down.


Lately I've been thinking
Always reflecting
Never ceasing
Thinking of the times
The times spent with the one I cherished
The woman I dated
The woman I loved
My heart weeps when I think about the times
Good and bad

And then, when I think of it again
I realize there never was anyone
A girl to love
To hold
To be with
There was nobody by my side
No one to hold my hand

There never was anyone
I was always alone

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Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 3rd April 2005
This is a sad little poem. :sigh  
No quarrel with it, we all have at least one of these inside us. 
 
Perhaps you could shorten some of the longer lines or split the up a bit to tidy it up but hey, that's just me...I llike things tidy!!! 
 
spidey

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