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| By KateRussellVampress | ||||
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Just dreamin away of far away places-'If' IF If I could go just anywhere I know where It would be A place of gorgeous lush green hills A view as far as I could see
Where sun would shine throughout the day A weather crisp and cool and bright And soften to a warmer breeze At the approach of each new night
The people would be friendly Each offering up their smile And passers-by would tip their hats And stop to chat a while
At oceans edge the waves would splash Into a frothy whipped up cream And clouds would laze across the sky As I lay to watch and dream
Crystal clear, deep springs would flow With water fresh and sweet And you could see the worlds reflection In the ripples at your feet
The flowers washed across the fields Would paint pictures through the grass And fill your eyes with colour As you wandered down your path
The butterflies that dined among them Would all flicker and take flight As if the petals come alive To dance into the night
The smell of delicacies on the wind Would tempt the strongest will And would be ready just as we were Until all had had their fill
So if I could go just anywhere This is where I’d be But of course I wouldn’t go there Unless you came with me.
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