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"Is There Life On Mars ?"
By sara
03 July 2005

The world is getting crazy
filled with sadness, hate and pain
Surely for all this suffering
there'll be a spiritual gain ?

The hows, the whens,
the wheres, the whys
swim around my head
as I philosophise

So why was I born ?
And when will I die ?
And is there an afterlife
up there on high ?

Why are we here ?
What does it all mean ?
And how do we fit into
God's Great Scheme ?

Whether UFOs are real,
we'll probably never tell
Are God and Heaven real ?
Does the Devil live in Hell ?

I've analyzed Bowie lyrics,
for what it's worth,
but I'm still wondering
Is there life on Earth ?

Reviews
clever introspective
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 3rd July 2005
enjoyable - are these performance pieces?
Thanks kevin robson73
Written by sara (29 comments posted) 4th July 2005
Thanks for your comments. I would never have the confidence to read any of my poetry in public !
Smart
Written by Lex22 (4 comments posted) 14th September 2006
Nice It's a good read

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 21st May 2007
Very nice indeed :)

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