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Poetry
Daddy Drank
By bwoz
24 March 2007
An acrostic poem.

Did nothing for money
And nothing for his pride
Dirt in his words,
Damned indignation,
Yelling that dirt and drinking

Didn’t get the overtime, a promise lost
Rained all night for the perfect excuse
All gone to Hell with wasted lies
Never worked an honest day and
Knew nothing about a man

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Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 24th March 2007
Works as a acrostic but reads pretty disjointedly to me. Perhaps I'm just not tuned into your thinking today. Sorry. 
 
Phil.

Written by Josie (2796 comments posted) 10th January 2008
I really cannot relate a series of short statements to poetry. Sorry but a good poem has to be more.

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