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| By emacskye | ||||||||||
| 24 March 2007 | ||||||||||
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thanks to Cliff i've rewritten my poem in a chaucerian roundel stylee, please feel free to comment and let me know if i have improved from my last attempt. thank you. The lighthouse keepers' daughter I stand in the light my families’ tale The ships sailed past, we stopped them grounding We were the last, technology was pounding I show my full height in any gale The boats go fast, the waves hounding I stand in the light my families’ tale I feel my chest tight as I leave Glendale The light will last, no foghorn sounding Our story is past, memorabilia surrounding I stand in the light of my families’ tale
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