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| Love Struck <3 | |
| By Love_Lost_Poet | ||||
| 25 March 2007 | ||||
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I wrote this piece when i had just had a fight with a gurl that i had truly loved
Are we nothing but pages? I still love you We climbed the romantical love stages Hoped we could have lasted Through times and dark ages Bring us back to where we was To where our love twas December in which those pages Written to remember, My love, misunderstood dilemma Look up at the skies nights Paint your face in stars, which shone bright That gave me your miraculous sight Riding through you mind To the sunset alight Turning the leaves of your book That showed you were once Love Struck Tear drops, Tear stained pages Ink running words Not to be released To hear or be heard Of your heartbroken words. Behind that crooked smile Lies a woman with such fulfilling dreams With a brokenhearted inner child Within your mind, filled with nothing but the feeling of kind Waiting to be released and shine Hearing the crying and laughter That feeling of your love struck chapter
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