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'has no title yet'
By Happy_Malamute
26 March 2007
I can't think of a good title for this..

Were I a candle,
I would hold a glowing light
beating back the darkness
beating back the night.

Were I a cavern,
black would be my fit
and if a candle was brought into me
I'd hope it was unlit.

If I were a candle in a cavern,
then I could show my worth
If I were a cavern in a candle,
then I could be the earth.

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Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 26th March 2007
Do excuse my stupidity.... 
 
If I were a cavern in a candle, 
then I could be the earth?? 
 
Phil.
Oh Freud...
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 26th March 2007
.. couldst thou be with us in this hour  
 
patterjack

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