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Poetry
Wicked Cahoots
By CarlHalling
27 March 2007
Adapted verbatim from a short story about a childhood friend from where I used to reside close by to Acton Green in west London, and penned in about 1975, or '76 according to how I saw things looking back at a decade previously.

When he made
his first personal appearance
in the dirty alley
on someone else's rusty bike,
screaming along
in a cloud of dust
it rendered us all
speechless and motionless.
But I was amazed
that despite his grey-faced surliness,
he was very affable with us...
the bully with a naive
and sentimental heart.
He was so happy
to hear that I liked his dad
or that my mum liked him
and he was welcome
to come to tea
with us at five twenty five...
Our "adventures" were spectacular:
chasing after other bikesters,
screaming at the top
of our lungs
into blocks of flats
and then running
as our echoed waves of terror
blended with incoherent threats...
"I'll call the Police, I'll..."
Wicked cahoots.

Reviews

Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 27th March 2007
Err...shouldn't this be in poetry?
Well...
Written by CarlHalling (34 comments posted) 27th March 2007
Perhaps so, Steve, but it's part of an autobiographical "novel" I'm working on. It's not strictly prose, nor is it poetry in the traditional sense. But then, so many of the rules have been jettisoned, anything can be anything...:o)
Oh I see..
Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 28th March 2007
Sorry, I didn't realise. I will now go away and read the other two.

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