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Poetry
Charon
By Flippy_D
08 July 2005

I, I am the bone-cart man
Who drags his trade down all streets.
Past the invincible.
Theirs not a glance but contempt or fear.

I, who saw Juliet's sweet temples shine waxy-white in candlelight,
I am the end of ages;
I am the bloodless;
I am bonemeal.

Watch the crows tonight.

Water slicked over cobbles runs to graves,
And I stand, as a gaping God
With shovel-mouth,
A stranger on the hill.

Dressed in black now,
Those fleshy
And immortal.
They who still do not know my purpose.

Reviews
brooding and sinister
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 9th July 2005
liked it
hmph
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 8th September 2006
stop writing so well, it's annoying me 
 
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Written by Gwynedd (53 comments posted) 24th June 2008
I'm out of my depths when discussing poetry but I wanted to read this anyway. I love the idea of the bone-cart man. Is that the same as a rag and bone man? Probably. Anyway, strong images, I can tell that much. I like the line 'Water slicked over cobbles runs to graves'

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