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| From the hospital chapel | |
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| 01 April 2007 | ||||
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FROM THE HOSPITAL CHAPEL (c) mmSeason 2000 Baby and I look out at flat weather architecture built for function with offensive dull form and baby watches young trees dancing, a sop to form batted by a damp wind to brush the colourless sky in planless formless rhythms. I watch flat flat puddles left behind by last night’s downpour unshaped by lifeless roof forms now whisked frisked by this whimsy-wind tickled into sudden spiky grasping faces mouths leaping gates specks of face in a history of faceless. I have to wait for each next time raised by the random wind. In between they lie flat without senses feelings life left behind by yesterday’s outpour no drops falling today and baby laughs at the tossing trees reaching to the wide grey.
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