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The Music Box
By silversnake
10 July 2005

A therapeutic work, this is the outcome of my wrestlings with some destructive 'baggage' I was carrying. It's a little freedom song.


 

The Music Box

Sweet lullaby, sleepy little head

Pillowed inside Grandma's bed.

Ivory inlaid music box,

Promised, cherished heirloom.

Silver coins inside; used to

hide in pudding spoons.

'Only spend them if you're starving',

'I'd rather die' I said.

Sweet lullaby, sleepy little head

Pillowed inside Grandma's bed.

Ancestors dead and gone,

Promised box lives on.

Pudding, precious coins

Tempt betrayer of my loins;

He pissed them all

Against the wall.

Up against the wall went

Faith and hope, argument

Was useless, nothing to it

But to reconstrue it.

Coins are dead and gone

But the music box lives on.

Sweet lullaby, sleepy little head,

Pillowed inside my own bed.

 

Reviews
surprise package
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 13th July 2005
didn't expect the bitter part inside all that cosy sweetness 
 
worked well 
 
showed your skill in different dimensions
Frredom, yeah!
Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 14th July 2005
At least you still have the music box and a child? Grandchild? to hand it down to. Men! Who needs em?

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