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STARS
By JohnnyD
03 April 2007
The world of glamour in showbiz have made me to write this true reality about stars.

STARS

Stars are always never bright
As they gradually do diminish in horizon
Looking at the bright shining stars
We wish to weave beautiful dreams

As the dawn breaks
So does our dreams
About the glamorous stars
The galaxy keeps dying every single day

Johnny D
8th March 2007

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sort your grammar out
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 25th April 2007
apart from that, it's brilliant

Written by Signa (66 comments posted) 25th April 2007
I liked the idea behind this. How we keep dreaming of the beautiful stars even though they are dying (and of course the ones we see may already be long dead)

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