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UNINSPIRED
By alandavidpritchard
11 July 2005
A little acrostic poem

My

Uneasy

Song

Erupts:

 

Wisdom

Hovers,

Evading

Rough

Enquiry ...

 

Answers

Run

Everywhere,

 

Yelling

Outside -

Uninspired

?

 

Reviews
Uninspired
Written by tartqueen (21 comments posted) 13th July 2005
I thought this poem was very clever. You're obviously not afraid to try new things and experiment with structure and form. But somehow I don't think it quite works. it left me feeling vaguely dissatisfied.

Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 19th July 2006
I agree with tartqueen...the U in YOU doesn't work for me. Answers uinspired???......
but...
Written by isobel* (26 comments posted) 3rd September 2006
it does capture a sense of confusion quite well. 
 
i like the imagery. 
 
:)

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