Poetry
Crushed
By linguistictendencies
09 April 2007
A haiku


A yellow petal

A shining beacon of hope

Crushed by cold fingers

Reviews

Written by Lizzy (970 comments posted) 10th April 2007
I like this. 
Very graphic. 
Lizzy

Written by rilLie (5 comments posted) 10th April 2007
ditto to the above. ^__^ 
rai.

Written by emacskye (23 comments posted) 10th April 2007
spring is here, :grin i really liked your haiku. 
 
take care, 
Elizabeth
wow
Written by DevotedWriter (8 comments posted) 5th July 2007
This is brilliant. So precise and brief yet it holds such meaning! 
Well done! I love it.

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