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| Dance With Me | |
| By rilLie | ||||
| 10 April 2007 | ||||
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again, returning out of the blue. I haven't written in a long, long while, and I'm really nervous. :| Anyways, I wrote this before going to sleep while watching "Music Station" on Animax... and I sort of just doodled it. Classes are over, and I'm free, with lots of time to spare. :) I hope you like it.. or at least not tear my head off. :P Comments and Suggestions are welcome. Dance with me where the broken toys play and lead me there when night becomes day. With strength and with courage I want to see you dive. Dive into dephths of sea, to fight for what is right. I want to hear you laugh and I want to see you grin to find that you enjoy what blessings time would bring. I want to see you hold on to nothing but a thread to see you doubltlessly hope and believe til the end. I want to hear you sing the song, a song that lasts forever, and see your lips form those words, your heart and soul would gather. Until my heart stops beating and 'til when time is already gone, Won't you hold me 'til then, and then my world would run. Dance with me where the broken toys play and lead me there when night becomes day.
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