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Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 11th April 2007

Its a powerful image and you've got your seventeen syllables, but are haiku not supposed to be split into three lines of 5,7,5?

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Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 17th April 2007

bit of a cliche...if you're going to write haikus they have to carry a lot of meaning. Not sure you pulled this one off...

Elli

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